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The world is fiction? by ~gneralshock06:icongneralshock06:



if all the world is fiction
written by "your" hand,
why would you have wrought this place
where is your master plan,

if you've written the day to day
and the hours of my life,
then why include the envy
the anger, pain and strife,

if you control the circumstance
of how we're born and die,
then why do good people have shorter lives
and evil lingers behind,

if all the world was fiction
and choice was but a lie
then explain why i don't believe in you
and you diminish over time.
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Author's Comments

written as a response to "all the world is fiction", written from the view point of an atheist this time, instead of a god

original poem is here [link]

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:iconnina16:
Wow....I can't come up with anything to say other then that. I will say however, that I love this.

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:icongneralshock06:
thank you

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"boredom is the father of all bad ideas and undertaker to the fools who attempt the worst of them" gneralshock06 19:32 26/02/09
:iconthe-earl-of-sandwich:
I love how this fits in with the original.

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The Earl Of Sandwich - Purveyor of awesomeness since 1989
:iconnina16:
No thanks needed...it was well-deserved! (As always)

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Go Here! It is My Bubba

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