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explain what went wrong
because the world is full of bombs,
and no one blinks an eye as they
just continue right on by,

as the scene unfold right there
people seem not to care,
because it isn't in their life
they're not dealing with the strife,

victims call as they walk by
for help as they slowly die,
but victims remain unseen
in this busy social scene,

and why you ask is this the case
why can't society see the bombs they face,
because we've all become so detached
and the life of another doesn't mean jack

when this happens you've lost the race
no longer a human, but a distorted space
a microcosm if you will, where all around you
is void, is nil
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poetic randomness, unsure how i feel bout this

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I like the mesning and truth behind this. It seems to have some places that don't flow as well as others but the point is quite clear and easily understood. Well said!

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